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Re-Stomping In One Shoe Shy
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Re-Stomping In One Shoe Shy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Deep Doo-Wop ~*Marge Tindal*~ Two-stepping so softly through the things that I do Sometimes it leaves me with 'stuff' on my shoe That thing that I wrote is one-heel-of-a-note Pinching my little toes leaving me a reminder on my two left feet of such need to be a little bit lighter making the world so much cleaner for those souls who so eagerly step behind me So that in my zest for life I never side-step the issue of need that others might have no matter how deep doo-wop-deedoodoowop-dee-doo To spread so sincerely and most certainly dearly the compassion of fashion to fit all hearts in sincere search of footprints of their own quiet making Knowing full-well I have room for growing into the sharing of shoe Must wade thru DeepDooWop in smaller step of you ~o~  ~Just putting on one old shoe for the challenge~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was clever, catching with an air of both sides of the coin...s pleasing story Margie, brilliantly done |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yipppeee! Good to see you felt up to taking the challenge Marge!  This one is fantastic!! I so much admire your creativity with these shape poems. You have met the challenge well m'friend. ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"That thing that I wrote is one-heel-of-a-note ... So that in my zest for life I never side-step the issue of need that others might have..." This is incredible! Not only the contents but the shape ... a shoe ... truly amazing! Lady you are gifted! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is terrific! Any way you shape it! love, Barb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
No wardrobe is complete without a good pointy toe shoe! and RED, too! (that was red, wasn't it?) sheesh Enjoyed. I go back to bed until I learn my colors again. (You'd think I'd know that one by now, though, huh?  ) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"That thing that I wrote is one-heel-of-a-note" love it! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well, as I have said many times before, Marge, you are a fantastic artist. Thank you for sharing another one of your creations. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Marge you never cease to amaze me! This is so creative in every way - artistic presentation, humor slid in there, just everything! Fabulous  It is shaped like A SHOE I can't get over how you do these things! I am so unworthy lolCaroline |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I just love this Marge. You are something else!!! |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Marge! I'm lining up the shoes. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed your poem (challenge met!!) and the presentation is inspired! believe in what your heart feels... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent, for sure. Great art work. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I am really enjoying these shoe poems -- very clever one, Marge! *hugs*...jo |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Marge, I have missed your poems so...this one was outstanding! (as always) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks to all of you for the nice comments on this little 'repeat' .... good shoes are like that .... hard to get rid of~  Good to see you ALL ...~ Hi Tina~  (email me) *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So that in my zest for life I never side-step the issue of need that others might have no matter how deep wonderful thoughts Marge M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Entertaining and full of whimsy! ~ Just like the fanciful poem's delightful author!  EO |
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