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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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unifying element underscoring mystery soft acute fingers linking silent love some distored recollections I'll admit but those utter corridors of time signifies suffering pain and dispair picturesque was the dangerous land of you body what an addiction easy interaction oh this poor disease-ridden mind worldliness has taken us far into haunting positive answers facing the unknown striking flirtatious affairs smiles...connections deeply into cold blue silence that could never say no precise mindlessness in our suburban playground unfolding wisdoms surpassing skills attractive characters we were we were changing objectives making mystical sensations plunging me into that contemplative solitary state that the all of life enjoyes... a core meaning receives or earns beginnings to essential qualities (oh forgive me) I'm soooo jumping back and forth you see, they come & go skipping ore the mind like little sprites all colors shapes and sizes sitting on the edge of my bed all rumpled & broken sentimental pleasures longed for their own beyond the withstands yet a fragile peace way past cosmic shangralas lifting us to the rafters precarious but full of doubt its what keeps one alive changing objectives throughout long close ups of face mundane austerity stood out all the more great clarity of atmospheric meditation probed the meaning of humanity's groans which sedates and seduces oh life, how complex and utterly miraculous ultimately heartbreaking yet the fasinating charm of inventing ourselves nurtures transformation pausing for a good long closeup ache & sorrow in a world very large sometimes souless genuine poignancy you were like the voice of flamenco singers quaking mouth to mouth songs you were life, love, friendship connections ephemeral from heaven itself and now… I sweep the grave of our love with unemployed intimate advance skiping along (sigh) still skiping along ghost plesures have always run much deeper how does one explain that energetic magic it's supernatural whimsy quaking with every second with every beat of the heart like some wrath of not gaining what you want sometimes it is better than getting what you want outsized by destiny surpassing skill perhaps exactly as it started... perhaps presisely defined and expressed by sheer will |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Ant that the truth. Good write enjoyed the read.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"its what keeps one alive"....amen sistah, amen!! Huge hugs. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"outsized by destiny surpassing skill perhaps exactly as it started...perhaps presisely defined and expressed by sheer will" "Sheer will." Sometimes it is as simple as that. Love your expressive writing Lee J. HUG! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ '(oh forgive me) I'm soooo jumping back and forth you see, they come & go skipping ore the mind like little sprites all colors shapes and sizes' Yes, yes, yes ! Mine do that too ... and I try to corral them~ You sure do write gal !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"precise mindlessness in our suburban playground unfolding wisdoms surpassing skills attractive characters we were we were" And there are some days when I can't wait to turn the page, and other days I just want to put the bookmark in and make the story stop there. An interesting and introspective look at the poignancy of "ordinary". Superb, Lee. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
"quaking with every second with every beat of the heart like some wrath of not gaining what you want" Yes it is exactly like that, isn't it? Your writing is always so interesting, I get mesmerised stanza by stanza. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"sitting on the edge of my bed all rumpled & broken sentimental pleasures longed for their own" yes LeeJ perfectly done sigh... |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Amazing as always. Another delightful treasure for my "LeeJ" folder. Thank you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"how does one explain that energetic magic it's supernatural whimsy quaking with every second with every beat of the heart like some wrath of not gaining what you want sometimes it is better than getting what you want outsized by destiny surpassing skill perhaps exactly as it started...' Y E S !! Wow, Lee, you've accomplished something here that's not very easy to do -- put something into words, I could only dream of doing. ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"you were like the voice of flamenco singers quaking mouth to mouth songs you were life, love, friendship connections ephemeral from heaven itself" ~ Lovely Lee, sounds like he would be a difficult love to forget! Very stirring ~ and electrifying! The page comes alive when you put your words on it! Loveya! Linda |
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