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Believe In Me
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Believe In Me |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Believe In Me My life is shattered, and is still not found A single shard. But what could matter if I have a whole... Yet whole heart. You haven't turned away, And it has kindled hope in me. Again so frail... But soon to be My only light On the way, so long - Through endless nights I'm tired of being strong. I wouldn't ask Anything more Just to believe in me... Don't let me go... I come to you, revealing my true face, Without a mask, Months passed, but time has failed to kill my faith, And never ask Why I'm still here. I have always been - will always be; Im strong for you If you're strong for me. So many things I never told... It's like a quiz, Still left unsolved. It's - yesterday. Let's leave it then. I know: you'll forgive, You'll understand. Each second, spent beside you, I am me, I'm not afraid In minute weakness, like they all, you'll see A statue, frail. I know everytime my eyes get blind You see the truth. You know me inside Better than I do. You're my only light On the way, so long - Through endless nights I'm tired of being strong. I wouldn't ask Anything more Just to believe in me... Don't let me go... So many things I never told... It's like a quiz, Still left unsolved. It's - yesterday. Let's leave it then. I know: you'll forgive, You'll understand. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this hits home I feel it! |
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Nexis_Rose New Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 7Arkansas, USA |
wow...this reminds me of all the feelings that've been pent up inside me for a long time. great words. "Our physical bodies are merely temporary hosts for our everlasting souls." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I felt the hope in this, yet painfully so...taking on a personal dimension...collaborating with the dark side of love, making it dramatically packaged. Enjoyed |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
It's - yesterday. Let's leave it then. I know: you'll forgive, You'll understand Wow - this feels so familiar... probably because it looks just like what I see in the mirror some days.... but I'm with you ~~~ "It's - yesterday. Let's leave it then." We go on. Excellent work. I like the raw emotional feel to it. It is something that makes one's heart beat a bit harder than normal. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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