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Primal Introductions |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Primal Introductions Still, amid deep plum introspection Frost murmurs indifference to the leaves Stirring within me, visions left sleeping Ice within wanting fingers Drizzled down the heated fringes Of passion, melting pall streams Raised as Braille Be blind, I tell my mind Never to be seen, I tell my heart This time spent, irrelevant But for the spaciousness reflection grants Silk sheets appeal the chill just barely rose Shy, whereas the alibi of winter always knows The sun will set aplomb Dimming light over time Query made Under Cover Copyright Kkh 1/11/07 |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
wow the title drew me in, and i was not dissapointed. well done..Whew! ~Bill |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
The imagery in this was wonderful...Well done. "The more you suffer, the more it shows you really care.." ~ The Offspring |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kathleen... just beautiful!! RDB |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Gaaah! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Be blind, I tell my mind Never to be seen, I tell my heart This time spent, irrelevant But for the spaciousness reflection grants Silk sheets appeal the chill just barely rose Shy, whereas the alibi of winter always knows  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow just wow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I so love your unique turns of phrase in your poetry. I find your descriptive writing totally engaging, Poetessa Prima.  Warm hug, EA |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Ice within wanting fingers Drizzled down the heated fringes Of passion, melting pall streams Raised as Braille" Wow is right. Brilliant write! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Be blind, I tell my mind Never to be seen, I tell my heart This time spent, irrelevant But for the spaciousness reflection grants Silk sheets appeal the chill just barely rose Shy, whereas the alibi of winter always knows I am awe struck, you just keep pouring out incredible poetry... absolutely brilliant!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Still, amid deep plum introspection Frost murmurs indifference to the leaves" brilliant is right TD! |
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