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hands (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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My hands have seen you, once not so near as the breeze, that just now touches your face, ~michael your hands saw me once caught up in amaze silken content garnet in color draped over whole light your hands watched whispers fill me with wait the past is now your hands plucked milkweed pod fashioned a woman petal never seen before a color unknown to radiance your hands listened to woman song softly lilted in sparkling web of your weave then your hands lifted the breeze that just now touched my face folded the sky and were gone I was never touched till your hands saw me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady A delightful read.  |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
had to re read some lines, crafted too complex at times for me buttttt i liked the stuff i understood, diff angle than most ppl write at |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Sir Sy  thank you Devious |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Quite a handsome write, Kate...most enjoyable. Moonshadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you kindly sir MoonShadow |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oooh Kate... just lovely and dreamy! RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another in the series (I said "goodie" and rubbed my hands together when I saw it, not being able to wait to open it)  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Dixiethank you so much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"your hands lifted the breeze that just now touched my face folded the sky and were gone I was never touched till your hands saw me" Ah so beautiful Kate. Lovely indeed...enjoying this series so much. In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Nancy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
caught up in amaze silken content garnet in color draped over whole light your hands watched ~*~ I can imagine an artist of paints panting to capture this gist...  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Karilea you add to my enjoyment of the poem thank you so much... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You write beautiful poetry. I'm an "old" member of the pages and not here as often as I'd like to be. I've not read your work before but will be sure to catch some more of your poetic grace Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Ruth thank you for your wonderful compliment Kate |
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