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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2007-01-09 11:32 PM

Dying
By: Noah Eaton
1/31/06
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I'm dying,
dying,
to feel your heart,
beating with mine...
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I'm dying,
dying,
to feel our,
young fingers intertwined...
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Wishing into life
and beyond iridescent dreams,
to hear,
the music of the spheres,
dying to see you strip down your silhouette,
and hold you here...
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I'm dying,
dying,
to kiss the dew,
from your eyelids...
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I'm dying,
dying,
to share and disclose,
all my most mystical secrets...
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Yearning to speak love,
in a whole new accent,
together laughing,
it never comes out crystal clear...
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dying to hear you breathe in my ear,
and hold you here...
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I'm dying,
dying to catch a little glimpse,
I'm dying,
dying to taste the taste of lips...
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Learning to interpret,
the Braille of your goosebumps,
kissing and making up,
for all these lonely years...
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dying to blanket you with my vows,
and hold you here...
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reassure me,
I keep hearing you breathing for a reason,
in kissing and making up,
for all these lonely years...
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dying to blanket you with my vows,
and hold you hear...
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dying to kiss your skin,
and hold you here...
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"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-10 12:00 PM

Noah... this is just beautifully penned! RDB

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

2 posted 2007-01-10 03:29 AM

Loved it!!! Best verse to me was

I'm dying,
dying,
to kiss the dew,
from your eyelids...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2007-01-10 09:56 AM

Such a tender piece Noah.
Love this!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-01-10 10:32 AM

Beautiful post Noah
One could plainly feel the yearning.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-01-10 11:08 AM

What a great song!!
Enjoyed!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-01-12 09:40 AM

Oh, Noah! Your dream girl better hurry up and come into your life pretty soon! We don't want you dying away on us! If she knew what she was missing out on, she'd high-tail it to your side faster than one could say, "Passion Puppy"! :pigtail:

Loveya, Angel Boy!
Linda

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2007-01-12 09:57 AM

Learning to interpret,
the Braille of your goosebumps,
kissing and making up,
for all these lonely years...

beautiful

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-01-12 05:40 PM

I believe that is called desire...you seem to be swimming in it...James

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