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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
0 posted 2007-03-07 05:30 PM


Burden Less

There are times
when the heaviness of snow
isn't really a burden.

It lifts me to feel the cold
against my cheeks
and the sweat
rolling down my chest,
as I get a workout of thoughts
to make me feel alive again.

Each rise
increases the warmth of my heart
filling a need
to weather my world of aloneness.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-03-07 06:34 PM

I'm glad you keep the snow up there

I'll choose walking or something a little less strenuous than shovelling to make me warm down here
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-03-14 05:41 PM

thanks Dixie...at least the warmth has finally showed up

M
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