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Forgive-Me-Thoughts

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-03-05 06:43 PM

Forgive-Me-Thoughts

I remember when I could bend
into the shape of you,
when there was a softness in my heart
never knowing anything else.

Now locked inside are those four letter words
that rest in fear of the unknown,
the clock ticking away the memories,
a change of heart waiting for the new.

Walking a fine line between want and need,
sleep escapes into a super bowl of conflict
echoing the songs of yesterday recreated
into a lost dedication...

Here still, piecing together the broken shards,
lingering in transparent words,
a believer of forgive-me-thoughts
waiting to welcome another day.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

he11oxNASTY
Junior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 27

1 posted 2007-03-05 08:10 PM

Very lovely. Nicely written.

April-Lyn

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-03-06 02:55 AM

You so touched me, M.

A

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-03-06 09:41 AM

yes, a touching piece

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