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Open Poetry #40

Along The Curves

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-03-02 12:46 PM

I can feel you
lying there,

yes, right there,
along the curves
of          every breath drawn;

your essence
fills me with
the question    burning
of what is this?

This scent,
this sense
of knowing
what lies behind
those eyes
in soul touch   lingering
along the curves

of my heart.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2007-03-02 01:00 PM

beautiful title, lovely poem

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2007-03-02 01:22 PM

Fabulous offering here, it tingled my senses.

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-03-02 02:22 PM

Steven and Janette, thank you both so much. Happy Friday.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-03-02 10:38 PM

"in soul touch lingering
along the curves

of my heart'

well you knew those lines
would grab me
gentle Donna

hugs to you

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-03-03 03:52 AM

this is beautiful

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2007-03-06 09:06 AM

Kate, Dixie, thank you both so much for resting your eyes here for a moment. Hugs to you both.

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