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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Catholic Protestant Muslim and Jews Look at each other With frightening views What are we doing This isn't God's plan We are meant to be brothers Our family of man There seems to be something That gets in the way Confusing ours minds From what his words say Love one another The gist of his book No matter the language Nor how it may look I've missed something I don't understand WHO is it then If it isn't God's hand Who darkens dreams With hatred and fear Clouding our vision Till nothing is clear Sharpens our rage At the point of a knife Who sends the misguided To cause loss of life Who wants the world To tremble and shake Who takes innocent Lives in his wake Who breaks a spirit Then fills it with hate Demonic decisions Sealing their fate Who takes a man And warps his soul Death and destruction His devious goal Who turns souls black With power or greed Who preaches hate Planting the seed For slaughter of others But who do we blame The ultimate evil It's done in God's name mr_alleycat |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Structure, or content? If it's content, there is no pro/con. Just the question  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I think this is one powerful and honest poem. Wonderfully written -- all around one helluva poem! Good job. Alison |
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