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The Secret
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The Secret |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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My calling is to search the dream To find what holds my name and fate To seek the Secret of this life Before the time is just too late My life it turned, each day did change My routine gone and passed Relieved; reprieved, a second chance My time to make it last Then voices spoke, that I did hear My dreams and thoughts of mind did wake A Secret lost began to form And future plans I came to make To wish in thought, to feel and want To nurture what did grow within To then believe without a doubt Made better times in life begin I saw my future crystal clear Felt power, for my core was bright Not wavering in my belief Just knowing that the way was right To ask, believe and then receive Obedience of mind and will Not doubting what was to become The Secret gave and fills me still To focus on just what you wish To ask of life all that you dream From catalogue that knows no bounds Found mind and feelings on the team And then there came the miracle My wishes came to be I used the Secret I had found And life then came to me So just believe and you’ll receive Don’t waiver from the dream you long And you will find within a time Within that dream you now belong |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~ This is just plain downright WONDERFUL !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we are in fact as we believe our selves to be... well done...(wink) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I ran into here, mentally yelling .. Rick is back! Yay! And are you ever!!! This poem is a great way to start my day. I missed you. Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear marge, thank you so much for your visit and reply, great to see you here my friend. Dear Lee, thank you for taking the moment to visit and for your comment, as always I enjoyed. Dear Alison, I know it seems a long time between drinks, I miss you all as well and will try to visit more often, thank you for your great reply, much enjoyed. To you all my friends, once again thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
beautiful and so very ture. Take Care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Julieann, thanks for the visit, great to see you here my friend, you take care of yourself as well. Rick |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
I sware, if lifes biggest mistakes was to honor ones gut, we would all have happier tales. Its sad, how many years that we toss to just learn that. Great poem and wonderful lessons. I loved, "I used the Secret I had found And life then came to me" ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
RavenSmith, thank you for the visit here my friend, the secret holds both contentment and happiness, wealth of mind body and soul; I use what I know and it does make a difference and each day it reveals more, good to see you here, till again, take care and be well. Rick |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Rick, I recently saw the movie "The Secret" which expounds all I have believed for so long ... and still it hasn't come to me but journey on the soldier sang and so I shall regardless. Enjoyed your poem because it surely tells it like it is if one can just believe. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Honeybunch, just keep believing my friend and all will come to you. Thank you for your reply here, nice you could visit for a while. Take care. Rick |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then voices spoke, that I did hear My dreams and thoughts of mind did wake A Secret lost began to form And future plans I came to make To wish in thought, to feel and want To nurture what did grow within To then believe without a doubt Made better times in life begin I saw my future crystal clear Felt power, for my core was bright Not wavering in my belief Just knowing that the way was right To ask, believe and then receive Obedience of mind and will Not doubting what was to become The Secret gave and fills me still ~&~ My dear poet, I think you have it. Would that all could keep it... though sometimes we decide that life simply cannot be that easy... and we bring on our own sorrow. Very well done, Rick. Thank you! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, you bring warmth into my days, lovely to see you visiting my friend, thank you for the reply, very much appreciated. Take care. Rick |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your poem expressed the Secret very beautifully. I have been studying quantum physic principles for almost three years, and I have manifested some of my desires in very miraculous ways. Thank you for sharing the beauty of the Secret. Patricia |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Patricia, lovely to see you visit here my friend, thank you so much for the reply, I would be interested in how you did all that, it all just fascinates me. Rick |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this. Have been watching Susie Ormond lately as she has put out a new book. Mostly for women and money management. But her story is fascinating and any one would love it. We all live our lives every day I feel, and if we keep our eyes and ears open we will continue to learn every day. Thank you Rick, martyjo |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
martyjo, great to hear from you my friend, there are a lot of fascinating people and things out there, lovely that we can share them at times and learn. Thank you for your visit and company for a short while, much appreciated. Rick |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks for this beautiful poem!!! |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Rick, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So just believe and you’ll receive Don’t waiver from the dream you long And you will find within a time Within that dream you now belong ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wish I'd written that! Thought is a living thing, especially your own thoughts... One of the rare occasions that I really can relate entirely to a piece of poetry, Ivor |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. Beautiful again. enjoyed |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Rick... this is wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautifully written ENjoyable to read Thank you Liz |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Neeraja, it was a pleasure to share this with you my friend, thank you so much for your reply. Ivor, great to see you here, thank you so much for your wonderful comment my friend, it was much appreciated. Drauntz, nice to have you visit here again, thank you for your time my friend and reply. Roniece, thank you for your relply once again, your commnet was enjoyed as always, thank you. To you all my friends, again thank you to you all, your visits and time are so enjoyed and appreciated. Have a wonderful day and enjoy, till again take care. Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Liz, thank you for your visit here today, great to get your comment, lovely to have you back.. Rick |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Rick, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So just believe and you’ll receive Don’t waiver from the dream you long And you will find within a time Within that dream you now belong ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This really does seem so pertinant now, given the situation you are in! Best of Luck, ivor |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thanks Ivor, will let you know how I get on, thanks for your reply my friend, appreciated. Rick |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
secrets interesting title ARCTIC WIND |
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