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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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fridays are crinkle creeks with walls sometimes when alleys do chance meetings of highways and side street beauties you were leaving behind birds and bees and a parking lot with puppy chews that you threw your free time too your love box was in back up then for an stranger on wrong way blue taking stogies to the grave stone man you threw him a smile with no price tag lady chrome over candy and tan one of those daydreams stopped in time that would make old hounds chase their tails _____________ logography by daark scribblenote: birds and b's is an exotic bird place next to a cigar store owned by a local mortician. the rest is just positions of queens and rooks on the asphalt board |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"for an stranger on wrong way blue taking stogies to the grave stone man" and I am chasing my waggle tail too... (this would be "that way" that I spoke about...) lovette |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene one, thanks lady...yep I get it, seems you have been so many places I have. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
What an excellent line... "you threw him a smile with no price tag" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you lady page, thank you for the read |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like this too. I can't pin point one line because they all capture me. It's like reading a beautiful puzzle today - and, again, you leave me with a smile. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"you threw him a smile with no price tag" love that line, too reading you is always fun  M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and I love... "one of those daydreams stopped in time that would make old hounds chase their tails" I find special meaning there |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, thank you for searching through the limbs. ______________ MMs thank you for touching ms ______________ ladyone, always a dog at heart I guess? thanks lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do bring on Fridays with a smiling down... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Any time there is a Friday with your poetry here, there is certain to be a smilin good time right around the corner.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend _________ ms gs, thank you for your eye words |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you threw him a smile with no price tag.. love to throw you a smile any day Mr Daark.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R&B, would be a pleasure to reap one of your smiles ms, thanks |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
smiles all around ARCTIC WIND |
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