Open Poetry #40 |
If I were twelve inches tall..... |
ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
If I were twelve inches tall, Would a spider's web break my fall? Could I fly on a kite from morning to night? If I were twelve inches tall, I wouldn't likely feel small. Only in a dream could I be twelve inches tall. Would cats chase me? What about dogs? Who needs horse power when you can have cat power? Makes me wonder about Cat Deisel Power. If I were twelve inches tall, I could sail across the swamp And see giant frogs and go fishin' for minnows. The front lawn could be a prarie. Folks might call me a faery or a pixie. No problems there I might say. Bathing in a pocorn bowl might be fun. My indoor pool could be a bath tub. I'd live in a house made from clay, leaves and pine needles. But only if I were twelve inches tall. Just wanted to thank everyone for their comments on the previous poem titled Got Lost. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really enjoyed this and have to say there are many days I feel 12 inches tall surrounded by all the wonders of nature. Today I am in a frozen wonderland, just crying to be photographed and feeling much like your poem. What a great outlook on life period to see things from another perspective. |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
Thanks. I wrote this because I feel this way alot. Seems Im one people have forgotten or betrayed for unknown resons. The advantages vs disadvantages of actually being twelve inches tall is a long list. So guess Im glad to be 6 feet. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wonderful read. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
If you were twelve inches tall..you would have to tapdance on the computer keys to type your poetry! Good write. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And an expert player upon the Spinet.... ....something about a 12-inch pianist..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
lol delightful read different by all means ~Bill |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is adorable! |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
Didnt think this would be so interesting. So the trick must be letting my imagination get the best of me. Thanks for the comments. |
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