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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-02-23 08:09 AM

It is a private     something
that comes to visit me
on those special occasions
in the quiet of night
when mere thought
produces smiles

             shimmers through moonlight

memories slip slide
beyond the stillness     where dark
covers me

blanketed

in magical weave
of dreams
remaining unseen

yet   felt.

             Heartbeats escape to heavenly skies

angels hear them drifting by

sigh songs gather
in mournings dew,

Lovely
   is this      ache...

          this agony;

             my       demon

                 my mercy,

                          you.

I wonder if you’ve ever realized
how much it is that you give…

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-02-23 08:54 AM

Exquisite writing Donna!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2007-02-23 09:02 AM

   Donna, I do love your Gentle Spirit.

               Lovely
        is this      ache...

             this agony;

   Such a fine line that sometimes separates the aches of agony and ecstasy.

        Write on, Gentle Spirit, Write on.

               MoonShadow
.

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2007-02-23 09:18 AM

"in magical weave
of dreams
remaining unseen

yet felt."

Oh, Ms. Seamstress Poet you have "weaved" a fabulously elaborate zig zag course combining many of my favorite elements.

Mercy!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-02-23 10:43 AM

lovely indeed

very inspiring poem here Donna

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2007-02-23 12:02 PM

Whew!
I love it

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2007-02-23 06:44 PM

good read

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-02-23 09:20 PM

"sigh songs gather
in mournings dew,"

ahhh gentle Donna
I do understand
and love this poem

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2007-02-23 10:59 PM

very potent write, so filled with angst...nicely done...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2007-02-23 11:08 PM

oh my, and "have mercy"!

Lovely Agony . . . the title says it all!

Hugs, Robert

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2007-02-25 01:50 PM

words cant discribe the beauty of your heart~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

11 posted 2007-02-25 05:41 PM

your writing has such heart! I love reading it.

miscellanea

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2007-02-27 09:34 PM

Enjoyed...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2007-03-30 12:07 PM

Just poppin in to say thanks to all!! Hugs.

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