She Scrambles - [Part III of Trilogy]

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2007-03-27 10:38 PM

She Scrambles

Some say when one scrambles,
it is because one
is in search of everything that has been broken,
mixed together, then floats in some loss
of a moment’s peace.

But she scrambles
over a fiery heat of that last moment ~
her thoughts congealing here,
and there,

in need of the right kind of fire,

one that won’t dry her out,
or leave fluid
                                        moments of dismissal;

but something to bring her temperate,
done just so, brought to the right moment;
when she can be served perfectly
to the mouth of choice;

knowing that through all of the dreams
she ever conceived and encountered
in salty seas of green come blue, she arrives

correctly, distinctly, memorably,

just before she is

admired

for what she had always held inside.

~*~

Trilogy, Part III

© Karilea Rilling Jungel
March 22, 2007

Trilogy, Part I  /pip/Forum103/HTML/001658.html

Trilogy, Part II  /pip/Forum103/HTML/001739.html

Thank you all coming along, and enjoying this series with me.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-27-2007 11:09 PM).]

iliana
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1 posted 2007-03-28 12:00 PM

Brava, SIL! Love the analogies!

....jo

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-03-28 07:03 AM

thank you for sharing

you inspire me to want to write one of my own now, but I'll be amazed if I ever get around to it

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-03-28 11:19 AM

Thank you Ms. 'Sunshine' for gracing these blue pages with this fine 'Trilogy'!

I am certainly one riding Time's whirlpool.....
"in search of everything that has been broken"

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-03-28 11:50 AM

"knowing that through all of the dreams
she ever conceived and encountered
in salty seas of green come blue, she arrives

correctly, distinctly, memorably,

just before she is

admired

for what she had always held inside."

Perfect Karilea!
I so much enjoyed this trilogy.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Martie

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5 posted 2007-03-28 12:59 PM

Sissie

No greater blessing then for another to see inside to the most beautiful place, the one that nests and suckles and grows, within. You're lovely!

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-03-30 12:09 PM

"but something to bring her temperate,
done just so, brought to the right moment;
when she can be served perfectly
to the mouth of choice;"

the right kind of fire
burns in this poem
and brings me to the right moment Karilea

you inspire me also

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