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Can you make perfection?
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Can you make perfection? |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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~~~I wrote this in sincere apologies for my imperfections~~~ can you make perfection? like a bottled brew? can you make perfection? in a flask or maybe two? can you make perfection? over the flames of a campfire? can you make perfection baby? and soar me even higher? can make perfection? out of something that's already torn? can you make perfection? out of a ladys' scorn? If you can make perfection won't you send me a can or two send it C O D and address it to you know who.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
~~~I wrote this with sincere respect for the perfection of your poetry~~~ can you see perfection? in a bottled brew? can you see perfection? in a flask that's made for two? can you see perfection? in the flames of a campfire? can you see the perfection? that soars you even higher? can you see perfection? in the words that you have born? can you see perfection? in this lady who you scorn? If we can see perfection can't you also see it too? for there only is perfection in the words that come from you... Have Fun, Ivor [This message has been edited by ivordavies (02-21-2007 12:00 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I absolutely love this poem. I read it several times today and each time - I felt it and I smiled. I wish I had written it. (smiles) A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
AWWW thank you both so much I wasn't sure about it honestly...I just write whatever comes to mind....Thanx again you both are very sweet!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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