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Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
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0 posted 2010-08-01 10:02 PM



I wasn't satisfied with my poem originally entitled  "nature's plan" (and was actually going to preface it with work in progress when I first posted it), so I reworked it. I have also retitled it
"nature's paths", as to me this better reflects the poem's tone. Would love any and all feedback.

Best Regards all,

Novus_Os
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