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" Aye "

PurplePenButterfly
Member

since 2008-03-06

Posts 65
Canada

0 posted 2010-07-26 06:08 PM

Aye to the sunshine
   That smiles at dawn
   Aye to the dusk
   Which lingers on

   Aye to the moors and mist
   Aye to whatever
   Even if you don't get the gist

    Aye to the ocean
    Aye to the sky

   Aye to all fine sweets
   Chocolate by far
    Hailed as the best of all treats

   Aye to the wind
   And seasons change
   We live in a world of normal and strange

   Aye ...

  © PurplePenButterfly2010

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2010-07-29 08:05 PM

And yum yum. Love joye

Novus_Os
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 115
West Coast, USA

2 posted 2010-08-01 09:43 PM

I think that was great, and I really like the way you set the ending "we live in a world normal and strange", it sets a tone to the awe and wonder the world can present, and how life's a bit of a mystery. Well done.

Best Regards,

Novus_Os

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