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A Feeling of Forever
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A Feeling of Forever |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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A Feeling of Forever The silences of midnight On a mountain top I've heard, Where I have watched and waited For a sound or else a word To be carried on the breezes That just always seem to blow And bring the breath of winter, As they cross the slopes of snow. I have never been rewarded, But I linger anyway To marvel at the moonlight On the hills that stretch away. There's an other-worldly feeling In the scene I see below. The shadows of the mountains, That are falling row on row. There's a gleam of rock that's weathered And the pathway leading back, That leads me to the cabin Which is hidden in the black. I'm not in any hurry For this view is so serene, With a feeling that forever It will stay as it's now seen! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (11-02-2006 04:40 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is beautiful and calm. Very nice. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Your words drift as sofly as the new-fallen snow~ THIS IS GORGEOUS !! ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS !! *Huglets*  THANK YOU to My Ronnie for the beautiful Halloween card !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Calm and serene, brings the reader to a peaceful world. I particularly enjoyed these two lines. The shadows of the mountains, That are falling row on row. Quite lovely!  btw there are a couple of spelling mistakes, that you might want to fix. In the first stanza, L3—waited. In the last stanza, L1—There's.Ink runs from the corners of my mouth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thanks for your nice comments. Also thanks for that really nice Halloween card you made for Ron. He loved it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thanks for reading and you know I always enjoy hearing from you. I'm glad you liked this...........typos and all! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
wordancer: So much for spell check! I didn't catch those typos either! Thanks so much for telling me about them and I have corrected them. Glad you enjoyed the poem! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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