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georgek
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0 posted 2009-07-20 10:53 PM



Bloated Dick Whitney
Had sat high on his chimney

To eat a large scone
Till his neighbours had gone

He lit up a 'smoke'
Then tumbled and rolled
As he let out a sigh from high up in the sky

Fell off the roof
All twisted and skewed

He let out a yell
The fact he had fell
Deep from his perch
And onto a birch

Then let out a moan
Whispered and groaned
Finished his scone
Before he was dead

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1 posted 2009-07-21 01:49 AM


That must have been some scone.  Welcome to our corner.  Joyce
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2 posted 2009-07-21 01:54 AM


No kidding on the scone.  I was wondering what kind it was.  As a scone lover, I did enjoy this poem.

Alison

GBride
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3 posted 2009-07-28 08:17 AM


Was that scone soaked in cream? That's the way I like mine. Hey, that is some poem. Just the things to go with Zydico music which I am listening to.
GBride
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4 posted 2009-07-28 08:17 AM


Was that scone soaked in cream? That's the way I like mine. Hey, that is some poem. Just the things to go with Zydico music which I am listening to.
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5 posted 2009-07-28 08:17 AM


Was that scone soaked in cream? That's the way I like mine. Hey, that is some poem. Just the things to go with Zydico music which I am listening to.
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