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xCharliexChucklezx New Member
since 2008-12-14
Posts 5New Zealand. |
Side effexts of black and white stripes, Broken hearts and seeing stars, Falling from the second storey, Smashing brand new cars. Failing your fathers name, Doing your belt on knotch too far, This is your diagnoisis, This is who you are. From this point onwards, Your known as your drug, Your just another skeleton, Sweept under the forgotten rug. Standing up will bring you down, Your emotions are high, Self esteem low, Is this how hard you try? Blood dripping from the ceiling, The vivid tattooed on your door, The cameras on the way out, Look back at what you saw. Fidgity complusions take over, The fat bubbles on your skin, Ears are burning of hot needles, This is the world of sin. Side effects of black and white stripes, Broken hearts and seeing stars, Falling from the second storey, Smashing brand new cars. Failing your fathers name, Doing your belt one knotch too far, This is your diagnoisis, And this is who you are. |
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Hope Fleeting Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 52Smalltown, Somewhere |
Cold and stark. I like this. ~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~ |
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olijay Junior Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 14San Francisco! |
I think i know the black and white stripes of which you speak, its a though break I loved this poem, i like how you brought the first paragraph back. also this line: This is your diagnoisis, This is who you are. thats my favorite out of the whole thing, its got that haunting echo in your head affect you kno? |
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Fade Junior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 38on a (temporall) plane |
excellent write. |
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