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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-10-06 05:53 PM


Tears drip,
On a solem day,
The dancing cats,
In the freezing rain,
Dance and sing,
Sing and dance,
The pit patter of thier feet,
The light singing of thier voice,
A bitter-sweet candy,
For the mind to hear,
Dancing cats,
Dancing cats,
Singing thier song again,

Sing your bitter sweet melody,
My Sweet,
We dance another day,
Just waiting,
Just waiting,
For you,
For him,
For her,

I love you,
My sweet,
Sing again,
Young and Old,
Save us from,
Save us from,
Save us from,
Ourselfs

The blood stained floors,
Where those cats danced,
They danced,
They prayed and hoped,
Hoped and Prayed,
Only one soul cried,
On thier day,

Here I am retelling a tale,
I saw once ago,
When All around,
They laughed,
I felt sorrow.

© Copyright 2008 Abigail Arnold - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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1 posted 2008-10-17 11:20 AM


i enjoyed the dance.  Joyce
Hope Fleeting
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since 2009-02-23
Posts 52
Smalltown, Somewhere
2 posted 2009-02-24 11:31 AM


Dancing cats brings a picture of sorrow struggling to find happiness in my mind.

I enjoyed the way this poem flows.

~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~

I know when to bow my head in defeat and move on...

KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder
3 posted 2009-03-03 11:20 AM


Hope fleeting is right that is the whole story
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