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Danny Cobb
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0 posted 2008-07-10 05:53 PM


summer simmers

  heatwaves heave

    tempers torch
      
       lighting loves

             waters warm
        
       swimmers splash
    
    teriffic time

beaches bash.

  cars cruising

     babes bopping

       savory smells
    
           sandy shores

       tanning torsos

  heavenbaked hues

summer simmers

wonderful wow!



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-08-11 09:14 AM


Danny~
Searching for more of your pennings and I find you down in the Pub with no responses~
How rude of us, like we have other lives or something ...  ME included~

Welcome to our world~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Danny Cobb
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2 posted 2008-08-11 04:16 PM


thanks Marge for befriending me---
sorry for the attitude, I had in the other forum.  I just thought folks would be more supportive and responsive. I thank you that, at least you took the time to read my meager offings.

THANK YOU<
  danny cobb

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3 posted 2008-08-13 03:35 AM


Dear Danny, I love this.  I'm sorry that I couldn't read and answer sooner but my computer has been down.  Back on the road again and hope to see more of your work.
Love, Joyce

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4 posted 2008-08-25 10:34 AM


Danny,

I like your summer a lot and felt the simmer through your words.  I peek in here more seldon than I should, but one of the joys of poetry (in my mind) is the joy of discovery.  It's nice to come across your poem this morning.

Alison

Danny Cobb
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5 posted 2008-08-26 06:31 PM


Thank you Joyce, for checking out my poetry! I'll have to return the favor!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I agree with you Alison, you never j=know what treasures, what interesting nuances or perking poetic expressions you might come upon, since each is unique to each one!
I am happy I made your day better--and will soon be checking out some of your gems!

   danny cobb

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