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angelichate
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since 2008-01-31
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California

0 posted 2008-02-09 12:29 PM


Rapture
_______
Attention rapt

my little-finger 'round

Storms comin'

no clouds brewin'

Footed sure

against the twilight

Coming night

against the light

Anger filling

light spilling

Rapt attention

'round my little finger

________

Dedicated to the memory of Joanne Owen.

© Copyright 2008 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-02-09 04:42 AM


Sarah

That is a very powerful & emotive  post, well done and welcome.......

John

[This message has been edited by effjayel (02-09-2008 11:23 AM).]

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