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smellmyfinger Junior Member
since 2007-12-02
Posts 21Wyoming,Natrona |
It turned to fire and light Burned the watching eyes Shook the ground it stood on As death looked upon His new friends We are to blame For our own fire and flame We are to blame For what we do In God’s name He took the mission To show his heated rendition We believed the politicians And used our ammunition All to kill for revenge Why for this Why for Him Why for what We don’t know exists |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
i sense a growth process. look deeper into your concept of death and god. i see "why" as a question. at present your concepts appear to be personifications. i believe you are ready to evolve in your belief system and that will help in understanding the why. realize, science validates that matter and energy are not created or destroyed but only change forms and that, too, is a growth process...what i offer is, intended, only as a perception of your work based on my own experiences and views...enjoyed your poem and insights. [This message has been edited by r v wooo (01-17-2008 11:43 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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