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jossal Junior Member
since 2007-09-15
Posts 23 |
A snow capped hill, No nature resided there, Came the broken, then, In numbes of 10. Tragedy followed them, As they bowed down, Misery, not told by pen, In numbers of 10. They had had enough, Fought with all their might, Fierce duo battles on fen, In numbers of 10. Years passed, Millenia, now, Humans not remembering them, And so faded away the 10. Darkness is only the lack of light... |
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jossal Junior Member
since 2007-09-15
Posts 23 |
Eins 1 zwei 2 drei 3 The names of the 10 vier 4 funf 5 sechs 6 sieben 7 acht 8 neun 9 zehn 10 Darkness is only the lack of light... |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
jossal, much intrigued by your poem...and i, too, believe that darkness is only the lack of light...but i have existed at the bottom of the fen for a very long time and believe me when i tell you..."it is quite dark at the bottom of the bog". as a little boy my grandpa would try to teach me to count in german but i was only interested in counting to funf. he would then give me a nickel. in that day and time, even tho sugar was in short supply, i was able to buy a lot of candy from frau knight. [This message has been edited by r v wooo (09-16-2007 12:36 PM).] |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
jossal, am still intrigued by the poem and its meaning. i have an interest in personality theory and where minds have been and where they are going. that is why i believe it is important to bring your poem to the surface of our poetic heap in the hope you, as well as others, return and comment. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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