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Trillium
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0 posted 2007-08-18 09:49 PM





Morgan's Wife

The sheriff rode out early.
It was scarcely breaking day.
Said he had a prisoner
Who had somehow slipped away.
Morgan said he'd help him out.
Then he saddled up to go.
I asked him when I'd see him,
But he said he didn't know.
I stood and watched them riding.
Did all the chores I could.
Hauled in two pails of water
And stacked up some more wood.
By night time, it was snowing hard.
I was glad to be inside.
Then a face showed at my window
And there was no place to hide.
The man who stumbled through the door
Was exhausted, I could see.
He collapsed upon the floor
Then he made his plea to me.

He said he was not guilty.
He'd been framed and couldn't die!
His eyes were full of anguish.
Now I couldn't tell you why,
But I knew that he was truthful.
Knew I'd help him if I could.
I gave warm clothes and money
And I also said I would
Give my horse, that I held dear.
I just only asked that he
Would provide the best he could
And he'd treat her tenderly.
He thanked me and he hurried.
Heavy snow soon hid his track.
But what would I tell Morgan
When he came riding back?



Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2007-08-18 11:17 PM


Oh, I like this Betty.  She'll have to think up a good story for Morgan.  Love, Joyce
Jess
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2 posted 2007-08-19 04:34 AM


Say there was a stranger
Who knocked upon your door
To whom you gave directions
Some food, and little more
When you went to lock the barn
--And to your great dismay--
There was an empty stall because
The horse had run away
And if he gets suspicious
Just candidly reply
"Just as our founding father
I cannot tell a lie"

As you can see, I really liked your story!  

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3 posted 2007-08-19 08:56 AM


Those who do for people in need have a heart for God. What they do for others is what they do for God. No wonder you are such a terrific person, Betty Lou!
love, Barb

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4 posted 2007-08-19 10:58 AM


i loved this story poem...hope to see it continued in some way...possibly as a short story.
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5 posted 2007-08-19 02:20 PM


BettyLou~
You CAN spin a poetic yarn~
*applause*

And ... now isn't Jess's reply a cutie too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2007-08-19 02:41 PM


Dear Joyce:

Thanks so much. I haven't quite decided what she will tell Morgan!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2007-08-19 02:42 PM


Jess:

I love your response to this poem!  Thanks for giving me a solution! Enjoyed the poem you did it with too.

Betty Lou

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8 posted 2007-08-19 02:43 PM


Dear Barb:  Your answer warms me through and through!  Thanks you!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2007-08-19 02:45 PM


r v wooo:  Thanks.  The original is a much longer poem, but I shortened it up to publish it here. I think I managed to keep the meat of it however. I have toyed with the idea of making it a short story.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2007-08-19 02:47 PM


Dear Marge:

Thanks so much for your nice compliment. i just loved Jess's response! Gave me a good excuse in case I do more with this.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

r v wooo
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11 posted 2007-08-20 12:51 PM


liked the reply by jess...
r v wooo
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12 posted 2007-08-24 09:56 AM


betty, i'm relatively new to the pub and the history of its long standing contributors. i have a curiosity about the origin of your moniker or pen name. being a biologist, with a backgound in botany, was wondering if you had an attraction for the trillium flower. its an intriguing genus. there seems to be others with flower connections. thus, forming a beautiful bouquet of poetry inside pub#3.

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (08-24-2007 10:58 AM).]

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13 posted 2007-08-25 06:27 PM


r v wooo:  Thanks for asking about my Pub name, Trillium.  I love the flower and we have a small woods where they bloom profusely in April. I joined the Pub site in April 6 years ago and had a bouquet sitting on my desk, so it was a natural choice.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2007-08-26 10:05 PM


what a fun read, it so enjoyable being taken away on a journey..love this!
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15 posted 2007-08-27 12:46 PM


Vincent:  Thanks a lot for commenting on this poem. It's always nice to know when
someone has enjoyed something I've written.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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