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In Dream |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
In Dream I dreamed of you again last night A rare dream I haven’t had for months You loved and betrayed me All over again and again I fell for every move Just like the time in real life I really thought you loved me I was so wrong it made me sick I saw your face the other day It caused you pain to look my way No one saw the things I did for you But they saw what you broke in two I dreamed that you took me back Loved me more than I deserved It’s funny because I don’t love you No I don’t, never again Why did a pretty face change what we had? Was I just too ugly or too outspoken? Did it make you sick that you picked me? If so I’m sorry, don’t look at me again I’m sorry that you hate me I was just what I thought that I would be It takes all I have to not hate you too I’m kinda glad that we are through I dreamed of you again last night A rare dream I haven’t had for months I woke up this morning with a face That held no expression If love were a picture that painting would never be finished. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
wowza! This poem was awesome! There was so much emotion in it and I could kinda relate... That kind of anger always sucks... Great poem tho... One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Why should you be sorry it's the other person fault? ahh well I liked this. a lot of raw emotion great hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
b/c i feel it was my fault that i drove him off - even when that's not the case- it still feels like it is. besides, apoligetic feelings are easier to deal with that sad and depressed ones are. If love were a picture that painting would never be finished. |
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