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A present future |
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Dooglam New Member
since 2007-06-20
Posts 5Pasadena, CA |
Time seems forever does it not But someday it will betray us When we’re withered and torn away So mold my soul of clay Now before it is gone Melt my heart with yours And take me with your song But not of tainted love and lies But truth from within the lines And paint this vision that we see Of greater trust in all our needs |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
this is really great. my favorite part: So mold my soul of clay Now before it is gone Melt my heart with yours And take me with your song i really like it i hope to see more of your stuff |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!!  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow I really like this and Welcome to Passions. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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