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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
A drop of crystal cascades from the sky. Right t into my open mouth-melts on my lips. Make me proud to be a human and proud to be alive. Dissolving on my tongue, here is nature’s kiss. A bushel of droplets of evaporated dew Lands gracefully on my face Washing away my past, soak me, but it just soaks you. You kiss me in the rain, for my sake. With your arms around me I stare up above. A sapling tries to stand up amidst nature’s blows. A single drop of rain falling for love I look around behind me, where did it go? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe I really liked this  hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this was just wow it was just wow enough that i had to say it twice amazing poem |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
With your arms around me I stare up above. A sapling tries to stand up amidst nature’s blows. A single drop of rain falling for love I look around behind me, where did it go? this was my favorite part. great job i really loved it |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
rhia. i loved this. i have always loved your work since the begining. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
this is one of my favorites- straight to my sparce library it goes. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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