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Teen Poetry #8

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Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-23 02:09 PM

A beautiful Creature

Sitting in the window
Listening to the wind blow

A scream turns into a howl
The girl who went to the woods

Comes out a Beast
The beauty of change has occurred

Lou Garou loathe human
For they take what is not there’s

Children play with in the woods
There laughter turns to cries

Two children have vanished
Six have demise

Life comes from every wich way,and sometimes nocks the breathe right out of you

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-23 07:10 PM

woah great ending")
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-07-23 09:53 PM

it was all disconnected and didn't flow so it was very hard to read but i liked how you used lou garou and the last two lines they were great

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2007-07-24 10:16 AM

this was awesome.

Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-24 12:47 PM

I no it didnt really flo but most of my poems are like that, but it depends on how you read it, when me and my friend wrought this we read it in a husky tone hehe
But yea werewolves r my fav my room is done in them and every thing im kind of a freak but i dont really care what people think of me lol

A time to kill, and a time to heal;
A time to break down, and a time to build up;
A time to weep, and a time to laugh;
A time to mourn, and a time

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