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Teen Poetry #8

How I love you

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-06-19 01:54 AM

I love you more than words can say,
And the way your eyes can shine,
I love you more and more each day,
And even more knowing you're mine,

With every sight I see,
When all the world is gray,
It's nice to have you holding me,
When everything's gone astray,

The longer we're apart,
The more I have to dream,
It's ripping ay my heart,
Down to every seam,

So come back to me tonight,
Lets make everything alright.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

myheartbleedsrazorblades
Junior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 13
Canada

1 posted 2007-06-19 08:33 PM

Ok, as un-manly as this is to say I rather do like your "sappy" poetry!! And dont take sappy as a negative or anything... it's the only word that comes to mind. Not a bad poem although it seemed...disjointed a bit. Probably only to me though! Good job still!!

Look on the bright side of life. Dont take it all to seriuosly!

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-06-20 11:37 AM

I really liked it

It was very sweet.

There is only so much blood i can bleed for you, and continue to live.

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