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Teen Poetry #8

Completely lost

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

0 posted 2007-06-17 02:43 PM

I've already drifted into oblivion.
I'm not even here anymore,
and yet you still say
I love you.

But how could you love someone
who is so tied up in their own thoughts?
My mind is completely gone
And now I'm just a body
without the spirit.

It's lost
and I stare into your eyes
but I can't understand the stories
that lie behind them
as well as I used to.

You say that you'll help me
find it again.
But there's no way to find
a spirit that's already
found someone better.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-06-17 03:17 PM

umm you make me think . . . good write. i think that the beggingin was my favortie

-Red

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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