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Teen Poetry #8

Its Your Fault

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-06-17 12:04 PM

your rancid taste is in my bones,
i can feel you in my breath.
from far away in a messed up place,
filled with anger and distress.
and it hurts to think,
that i once trusted you.
i gave you my trust,
and you just broke right through.

so back away in a quickening pace,
before that mirror reflects scarlet in your eyes.
get away from my cold hard stares,
i wont forgive your dirty lies.

because your not worth the tears and pain,
for me to waste my life.
so im sorry if you feel this way,
im just going to leave you behind.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2007-06-17 12:22 PM

Another amazing one!!! I'm completely amazed every time you put pencil to paper, you're incredible! Excellent job!

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

myheartbleedsrazorblades
Junior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 13
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-17 02:31 AM

Garr, tell it like it is. I love poems about people finally coming through for themselves and standing up. Nice job!

Look on the bright side of life. Dont take it all to seriuosly!

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

3 posted 2007-06-17 02:21 PM

wow this is great. there's so much meaning behind your poem...good work.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2007-06-17 03:15 PM

thanks for giving me something of substance to read. you d me, and it also seems you've captured the rest of your female audience as well.

lol
-Red

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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