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gozaggss
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 33

0 posted 2007-06-11 09:23 PM

The School year is almost over
the sun lags low in the sky
And when I look at my friends one last time
I feel the urge to cry

the report cards have been mailed
mine are pretty bad
my friends are cleaning out their lockers
it makes me really sad

to say goodbye is really hard
I’m afraid I don’t have the heart
sometimes I don’t know the words to say
but nothing said comes across tart

a year ends, but another begins
the summer days are born
I’m going to really miss all my friends
the idea fills me with scorn

in no way do I like school
but it offers me one guarantee
that I get to see my friends everyday
and always in my time of need

farewell, Junior year,
it's been... ehh.. alright...
the best part was when we laughed together
that stuff was outta sight

our story's coming to an end
we all have our stages
but I’ll write down all of our endeavors
in this book of empty pages

time's almost up
the hourglass' been turned
I can't believe this school year's over
there’s only one thing I learned

friends are the glue that binds me together
my life, my story, my soul, and my laughter
so here we come summer. Are you ready for us?
Last page is filled. Happily. ever. after.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-06-11 09:30 PM

awwwwwww love it. now senior hey, love what you have and find what you don't, pick the right from the wrong and you'll be happy and if not that then at least satissfied.

-Red-a-la

I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-11 11:33 PM

wow another great right i liked this one just as much your words on the hourglass were just fantastic

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2007-06-12 02:08 PM

friends are the glue that binds me together
my life, my story, my soul, and my laughter
so here we come summer. Are you ready for us?
Last page is filled. Happily. ever. after.

So true, this is great, I love this stanza it is really good. Fabulous work. As an alternate title though your current is fine, what about "Are you ready for us?

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