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Teen Poetry #8

Ode of the Lazy

myheartbleedsrazorblades
Junior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 13
Canada

0 posted 2007-06-11 03:25 PM

The cow in the barn is smelly
I hope that she has a fully belly.
For it’s such a long walk
With no one to talk
So I’ll just stay here and watch telly.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-06-12 12:26 PM

hmmm nice lil' limeric. I did notice that you wrote fully instead of full. I'm sure you didn't mean fully. Welcome to Passions.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

2 posted 2007-06-12 04:12 AM

First of all, welcome to Pip! And this was an awesome first post! I love it!

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

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