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Teen Poetry #8

What Will You Miss?

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-06-06 10:31 PM

have you seen it?...
why...its simply increadible... is it not?
that the way a heart breaks, then mends,
leaves you with wisdom, when starting over again.
And then again, the deepest wisdom in life is within itself complicated.
for its not what you value in life the most that you will truly miss when it all falls away.

now the indulgence in the conspiracy of man,is a mystery in itself.
the way we strive for the machine of society, when were really just a statistic on a shelf.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-06-08 09:35 PM

i could see this being in a movie that a person quotes if you don't get what i mean think of the quote cruz says about fear in coach carter good job

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-12 03:14 PM

that the way a heart breaks, then mends,
leaves you with wisdom, when starting over again.~
Really liked this part
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-06-20 06:37 PM

why...its simply increadible... is it not?
that the way a heart breaks, then mends,
leaves you with wisdom, when starting over again

you have a talent and a comprehension of things that go way beyond your years. you continually amaze and suprise me. your insight . . . is . . . ingenuis. wow

-Red

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2007-06-20 06:39 PM

thanks you all.

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

5 posted 2007-06-20 06:40 PM

wow this is seriously amazing you have so much talent it's insaine

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