Teen Poetry #8 |
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I WIll Put You In Your Place |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN ![]() |
running, breathing, crashing, sinking; the darkness leaves me cold. im breaking on the concrete feeling, that i will sink like stone. and all the while im going down, a smiles painted on your face. I guess that im just a no one, whos not good enough for your grace. well i'll tell you what, you bitter man i bet you cant stand as tall as i stand, when the waves crash down and subdue the tide, i will still be here ready to fight. surrounded in you holy light, can i grace you with my face? or can you come down here, your holyness... and let me put you in your place? |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Very good, nice flow. Another brilliant write, if I do say so myself! I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
that was very powerful thank you for writing it it was very good |
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