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Teen Poetry #8

I'm Not Worried

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2007-06-06 04:43 PM

I worry about the car breaking down,
I twitch every time it makes a weird sound.
I stress about failing an Algebra test,
I'll study for hours and get next to no rest.
I try to protect our friends and family,
but our love is one thing that doesn't worry me.

Sometimes I come home, the day's been a trial,
and you're the only one who can make me smile.
When I'm running around pulling out hair,
you just seem amazed by how much I care.
I worry about a lot, it's true,
but I have absolute faith in you.

And because of everything I just said,
your love's the thing that lets me keep my head.
I worry about you getting hurt at work,
but about our love, I'm not concerned.
You're not sure if you can be the hero I need,
but I'm telling you now that I'm not worried.

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-06-07 01:13 AM

Wow I love this it was so sweet, I understand completly where you are coming from...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-06-07 06:25 PM

You.. are.. the MOST AMAZING poetress! Gah.. totally jealously on my end:] every time i read your writes, im just in awe over and over!
Bravo:]

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-06-07 11:53 PM

amazing i loved the ryhmning and how you expressed being worried about all these things ecept for your love very awsome one day i hope to feel that love is the only thing i won't have to worry about things because i relate to this poem, i worry about almost everything and anything

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