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LEAVING ME
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LEAVING ME |
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Midnight Angel New Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 6Lakewood, California |
I sit here thinking of you Wanting to see you How much pain can one person cause So much for a young teen I can't see past all the pain All I see is your face You left me to deal with this all Why me? I hate this I keep getting up Not wanting to be like you But at times I break down Letting my guard down Crying for you You made my life hell Why? You cared only for yourself Now look Your gone for good Never coming back I hate you for leaving me alone, mother |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this was an awesome first post and i think this was really good poetry. i love the poetry with feeling, and trust me it isnt lacking in the emotions catagory. I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty. |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome to Passions I hope you like it here. Great first post, I agree with CO. hope to read more soon. hunnie. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rebekah~ Welcome to PiP~ A poignant beginning in this fine poetic circle~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
I enjoyed this.. sorry for all that pain you must be carrying.. always remember we're here on passions to help ya out in any way, maybe carry your burden a little:] God bless.. i can tell you are a good writer! ~missy |
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