Can't Believe You're Really Gone

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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2007-05-30 05:58 PM

i know its not seperated quite well, but i didn't really think it'd go as well if seperated into stanzas.. But if its too confusing to read, let me know, and ill give the stanzas a go. Otherwise, im just going to italicize some and bold others so its easier to keep place..

"Can't Believe You're Really Gone"

Its been a week now and i cant believe you're gone
Is this your way of telling me, nows the time to move on?
I can't understand whats going to happen, i just want you here
But i cant be wishing for someone when you want me to disapear
If your vague way of saying you've gotten over me
Is by blindly telling me get over it and see
That you dont care and just letting me down
Thats the worse idea you've come around
I cant move on and let go till you understand
I cant just get over it easily, take off this band
This shows something more than diamonds,silver and gold
Its a promise of love to remain till we're old
One little fight and you just take off
I thought you might be a little more soft
I thought we could grow from mistakes ive made
I thought through it all you'd have just sat down, prayed and stayed
Whats come of all this thinking?
Apparently none has any reasoning
I know you've moved on, and with me you're through
But i just wanted you to know, forever and ever ill love you!

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-05-30 10:10 PM

wow that has some deep emotions i found it harder to read with the italics and bold letters it should have been left as was but thats only my opinion but still a goodjob all round

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-05-31 03:25 PM

wow I really liked this nice flow too...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

3 posted 2007-05-31 07:17 PM

thanks so much y'all

Midnight Angel
New Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 6
Lakewood, California

4 posted 2007-06-01 10:19 PM

WONDERFUL!!!
It's sad that you lost someone you loved so bad but it'll come back and they will realize what they did. I thought you expressed yourself very well. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more of you. Thank you too.
Lots of Love,
Midnight Angel

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2007-06-03 12:25 PM

oh thank you so much for the reply midnight! im glad you enjoyed it :]

GB you<><

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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