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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain 
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i dont want to i open my eyes then i close them i slowly move my feet out of bed and touch the cold floor i wonder when being alive became such a horror i walk towards my bathroom and theres the mirror its the same face but its so different i just stand there and stare yes, theres me the me i tell everyone that i am but im not. i know it doesnt have much flow at all, but i was experimenting with a sorta different kind of writing.. just let me know whatcha think.. ~missy |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it was different then i thought it would be originally i thought it was explaining some one just getting up then it changed into being about someones feelings or so thats how i perseved it |
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Midnight Angel New Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 6Lakewood, California |
Hi. I thought it was good. I think everyone in the world acts different, hiding from their true selves. You did a great job. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
You are right, it is about someones feelings  Thanks for the replies y'all:] This was just basically about how every morning i, and other ppl most surely, wake up and feel irritated when they look in the mirror, cause they feel fake.. ya know? GB<> ~missy |
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