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Teen Poetry #8

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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-05-26 01:22 AM

you have your preppy little outfit,
and your syntetic smile,
your hair is all the same, it's this weeks style,

When you walk your hips move suggestively,
all the guys they stop and stare,
where ever you go they're always there,

you have no feelings than for yourself,
you don't care when your friends treat someone wrong,
you just laugh and join along,

all the girls wish they could be your friend,
all the guys want you too,
but seriously, who'd wanna be like you?

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-05-26 08:14 AM

I really like this and I know exactly what you're talking about!!! It was kind of a "welcome to my world" thing for me. It was really good. The rhythym seemed a little haphazard in some places but its still a really good write. Hope to see more from you soon!!!!!!

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-05-30 06:13 PM

YESSS!i so agree! thank you for writing this. Its perfect. lol

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-05-30 10:13 PM

The perfect poem to give example to any day life in my school i loved the end where you said you didn't think anyone would want to be her thank you for writing this lovely poem

Midnight Angel
New Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 6
Lakewood, California

4 posted 2007-05-30 11:42 PM

Hi. I'm knew and I read your poem and thats so true about how it his for a teen these days. You told the truth in the entire thing. Who would want to be a girl that did that. Nice work.

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