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Teen Poetry #8
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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
0 posted 2007-05-30 04:19 PM

The stars sit above us all
The ever changing sky appears
Unchanging full of tears
You see the beauty I see
In a different light as it maybe
Worlds apart
Living in wealth
As the people you see
Sit in pverty and ill health
Grime coats not only their face
But yours as well
But don't tell
That I know of the truth
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Tinsel
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 36
UK
1 posted 2007-06-04 02:38 PM

The ending of that was really good!
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