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Teen Poetry #8

Teenage Disease

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-05-24 10:58 PM

Flippin' through pages of my Bi-ble
no one ever told me, i was li-a-ble,
for the ones I can't define
i must sacrifice, something of mine.
Now, what you hear is fa-mi-liar
and time can't aid my bare
back issues we can relate to,
but obviously,
like a teenage disease
can't help but plead,
for a chance of crime;
a lil bit of popped cherries,
on a dime.
And this is just-is, what it-is,
can't be wrong, its just love
just-love is a game of
tears behind a smile leaving
no secret but straight-forward to
keepin' the silence awkward,
ignoring ****** friends
to last another weekend
so we can stay up late,
check mate, home run;
but the lust in you, so just in you
one-more-kiss before the sun.

-J

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-05-25 09:20 AM

well i seem to believe that the way you write is just a bit different especially when you break the words up

also i am sorry to be the one to tell you this but i believe it is stated that you should not repost the same poem

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