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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-09-06 07:26 PM

when she's happy she feels like living,
but after all this time she's stopped giving,
when she's sad she feels like dying,
she feels sick of trying,
she can't remember the last time she didn't cry,
as she lets out another deep sigh,
she can't help but feel like this,
she can't see happy, it's something she'd miss,
she hopes to stop thinking suicidal thought soon,
it makes her feel out of tune,
she doesn't think life's fighting fair,
because it seems no ones ever there,
she'd love to run away somewhere new,
but if she came back she'd have too much explaining to do,
so she'll stay here and live in misery and pain,
one step closer to going insane.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-09-07 09:17 AM

one word - Awesome poem! Wait... that's two? lol

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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nostalgic*pride
Member

since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

2 posted 2006-09-07 04:56 PM

You are, like, officialy my favorite poet on here. That's all I can say.

pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

3 posted 2006-09-09 02:56 PM

I really like your poem it's awesome

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2006-09-10 11:27 PM

Wow, very emotional write.
Keep sharing!

~Alli~

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

5 posted 2006-09-12 07:58 PM

I also thought this was an amazing poem, like all of your work. You are one of my favorite writers on pip as well. Hope to see more...Great write!!

"Knowledge speaks, but wisdon listens."
Jimi Hendrix

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

6 posted 2006-09-12 09:32 PM

i can't even BEGIN to say how great this poem was. wow. this is amazing, i think that reading your poetry is the best thing that ever happened to me!!!lOl but seriously, GREAT!

nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

7 posted 2006-09-13 02:39 PM

Ya, I had to comment again, because I read this to my friend Byron, and he was like, "Oh my Gawd, that was better than your poems, Halo. Ha, you suck." Sooo, I got all offened, but I figured you might want to know that someone else adores your work. =)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2006-09-14 12:40 PM

thank y'all for replying

ha my mom and sis made me read it to them as well... my mom wasn't too pleased... my sis was all like good can you do my homework now:P but thanks y'all and nooooo nostalgic*pride i love all your poems and i like everyone elses poems too acually i'm glad i decided to join y'all at this site

luv y'all
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

9 posted 2007-05-24 04:14 PM

Very good job, I think everyone goes through something simlar to this sometime in their life.. and if they dont.. then wow, I feel weird.. because I know I've been through this. Again, I must say.. very good job!

Becca.

stormdancer
Junior Member

since 2007-05-10

Posts 31
state of confustion

10 posted 2007-05-25 03:48 PM

Very good. Like how the last line pulled it all together.

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