I Wanna Be Your Everything

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Teen Poetry #8

I Wanna Be Your Everything

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-05-24 02:03 AM

I wanna be in your arms when you wake up,
and be the one to stir the coffee in your cup,
I wanna be the one to make your life deep,
and be the one to watch you sleep,

and I wanna be your everything,
I want it to be you when I hear the phone ring,
I wanna share my life with you,
and tell you things you never knew,

I wanna make you love me like you never thought you could,
and apologize when we fight even though you know YOU should,
but most of all I wanna sing,
I wanna be your everything

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

TayJay01
New Member

since 2007-04-24

Posts 9

1 posted 2007-05-24 08:37 PM

i really liked this one
i can relate
i love your writes

so lets get a little closer noww<33
the scene aesthetic
beauty in the breakdown

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

2 posted 2007-05-24 10:50 PM

Really cliché... tons of songs have the same title by artists like the Bee Gees or Kieth Urban.

Just be careful with overused lines

-J

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