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Teen Poetry #8

Graduation Song

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-05-19 09:02 PM

These past few years
Have gone so fast
I thought for sure
Forever they'd last

But I guess we were wrong

I knew in my heart today would come
I thought I'd be glad but now that I'm done

I don't want to leave
I don't want to stay
I don't want you to go away
I don't want you to stay

I don't understand
One bit of what I'm sayin
I guess it'll take some time
to get where we're goin'

But I know we'll be okay
Whether we're alone or together
I hope it's together
It's been so long
But not so long
Since we danced in a circle and cried
To the Graduation Song

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (05-20-2007 09:54 AM).]

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-05-20 09:08 AM

this is a good poem i liked how each part was able to flow into the next and how it had a beat to it most poems it is hard to find the beat but this one was so easy i liked it and it describes how alot of people feel around graduation time

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-05-23 04:34 PM

this was cute. good flow.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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