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Teen Poetry #8

lies

forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2007-05-20 01:58 AM

Im so freakin tired
I can’t find truth
im sick of the lies
falsity’s too smooth

I can’t feel a thing
numb, cant find warmth
but im still hurting
my heart, now is torn

I’ve closed my heart
But I still smile and go along
Loving is too hard
While pretending nothing’s wrong

Im looking for more
Than im going to get
but im almost sure
I had more at the start

Pride is satans specialty
He serves it hot or cold
He succeeded with me
But this is gotten old

You know what devil?
This is my life it belongs to me
For me to use for Gods will
I won’t let you in as MY company!

~me = )P

i can't sleep...i wrote this half asleep, so if its rambling, just tell me...lol

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-05-20 01:43 PM

I really liked this. There was one instance where "but" wasn't necessary, but other than that it really was good. I can realte. Great write! Hope to see more from you soon.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-05-23 04:32 PM

ohhh I loved this hope to read more soon.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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