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Just realize? (n/s bout title)
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Just realize? (n/s bout title) |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I try to write my heart But all that comes out when I start Is nonsense Perfectly describing everything about me I didn't ask for this Understand that now I don’t know why And I really don’t care how I didn't want to love you But now I guess I'm stuck Should I tell you? Or just realize I'm outta luck? It's not my fault At least I hope it ain't What happened to me? Life used to be so great... I didn't want to love you But now I guess I'm stuck Should I tell you? Or just realize I'm outta luck? I can't take much more of this Is love really there? Or is it just a myth? I didn't want to love you But now I guess i'm stuck Should I tell you Or just realize I'm outta luck? I didn't want to love you But now I guess i'm stuck Should I tell you Or just realize I'm outta luck? |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
at times the rhyms seemed forced and others it just seemed to flow nice job though |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Or just realize I'm outta luck?~ really liked these lines very good poem. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i didn't want to love you But now I guess i'm stuck Should I tell you Or just realize I'm outta luck? I love that stanza cause I really can relate.. I Don't want to like this person, but I cannot help it. And he isn't helping much because he still dosnt no and keeps flirting with me. AND HES LIKE ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS TOO!!!!!..Frustrating but aniway i sooo relate |
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